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Thursday 19 November 2015

Working with my Critical Friend: Wiremu/Manu

Today me and my critical friend.

Were working on a term 1 E-astle testing writing. Before we done it we made a copy before we done anything. We edited on Wiremu's E-astle writing term 1. It was pretty bad because He told me he doesn't like writing: His recount story was about his Sisters Birthday and on how His imaginary sister celebrated her birthday. They first went to valentines were you can get all the fattie food But fresh.

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